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Star
Member
Username: star

Post Number: 56
Registered: 11-2005

Posted on Thursday, December 22, 2005 - 4:34 am:

my gentle forest

silent
is my gentle forest

gentle
is my flowing brook

flowing
are my softened feelings

softened
heart an open book

~Star

karen
Valued Member
Username: trig

Post Number: 205
Registered: 09-2005

Posted on Friday, December 23, 2005 - 12:55 pm:

This is so clean... content, lovely :-)

Gary Blankenship
Senior Member
Username: garyb

Post Number: 6043
Registered: 07-2001

Posted on Saturday, December 24, 2005 - 11:22 am:

A fine, simple, seductive work.

Smiles.

Gary

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Zephyr
Senior Member
Username: zephyr

Post Number: 3531
Registered: 07-2003

Posted on Saturday, December 24, 2005 - 11:43 am:

Enjoyed the simplicity of this, lovely Star.

Emusing
Moderator
Username: emusing

Post Number: 2456
Registered: 08-2003

Posted on Sunday, December 25, 2005 - 12:22 pm:

Lovely Star. Nice rhythms and message.

E

Star
Member
Username: star

Post Number: 58
Registered: 11-2005

Posted on Wednesday, December 28, 2005 - 6:13 am:

thanks guys, glad you enjoyed it. isnt it wonderful to be able to express bits of ourselves and our observations? i just love the creative process!
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